Hydroslide by Coopa
Weeeeeeeeee! as I went down the hydroslide first. I stopped in the middle of the hydroslide and stood up. Ayden zoomed through my legs and Noah was coming down and smash! I fell on my back.The line was short when we got out so we went off and on down the slide until Naoh said “let's go do some bombs in the 2 meter deep pool”.I popped a staple and then Harlem did one too but he smashed into me.
Reflections
1.add more content to my writing so that I have at least
15 or more sentences.
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